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Post by ricegrains&rosesxo. on Feb 28, 2007 7:06:53 GMT
Have you heard the news that you're dead?
Why yes, yes I have =]
Y'know, I don't actually care that I'm dead.
But I do care about all that "broken promises" stuff. =[
I mean, he only broke one godammit.
He's only human... kinda.
And it's my fault toooooo.
I feel bad that I die being pissed off with Gerard =[
Well kinda pissed off.
Even though I'm smiling and everything.
I was annoyed with him earlier I think.
Him and the promises.
Y'know whats creepy?
I don't ever remember telling you that I wanna be shot...
Have you been jumping into my pc while I've been gone for dinner many a time =/
And in the place where I would normally say UPDATEEE or MORE,
I now resort to saying...
You had better write an epilogue to this.
And if you don't...
Well I don't know what I'd do. But I'd do something.
'Cuz I loveloveLOVE this thing.
Xoxoxo *SxPxF*
PS: Thats blue.
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xxcemetarydrivexx
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<3 -And as the blood runs down the walls, You see me creepin' up these halls- <3
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Post by xxcemetarydrivexx on Feb 28, 2007 11:39:00 GMT
Omg.........The end seems so sad...... i never knew that was going to happen.. Until SOMEONE whos name i will not mention but might be called yasmin, Told me  Almost mins before i walked past allie this morning. Lol but now i'm in my english class doing "research". I can't believe its over... It was such a cool story !! I might even read it again  Pleasee !! write an epi thingy I wanna no want happens to everyone else. Lol well done allie !!! Amy xxx |
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Post by ricegrains&rosesxo. on Feb 28, 2007 12:34:56 GMT
I SAID NOTHING.
You guessed.
Ha.
But yeah, epiolouge! Now!
Xoxoxo *SxPxF*
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Post by decay;; on Feb 28, 2007 19:10:36 GMT
EPILOGUE.
Our numbers were little as we stood on the damp grass, night beginning to fall as we closed our hymn books, the faintest droplets of rain falling upon it's pages and fusing them together. I'd promised myself I wouldn't cry, but out of guilt, I had no choice. She'd died hating me. I could tell, I just knew it, from the way she'd just vanished without a word, from the way I'd been told about what had happened.
Frank put a wet hand on my shoulder as the priest nodded for the undertakers to lower the coffin into the wet ground. I choked back a sob, trembling as slowly, she left me behind, the ground swallowing her up and away from me. Half of me was screaming to follow, to jump into the ground and crawl into the coffin and give up the pointless life I was living. Every waking moment, I felt myself spiralling further and further down with the guilt. Part of me was telling me that I'd done nothing to her at all, that it had all been in her head... but no matter what, I'd lied. I'd lied to the only person I'd ever loved... and I'd only known her for maybe two weeks.
He was trying to lead me away as the rest of the party proceeded to exit the cemetery, the rain on my eyelashes making them appear blurred and faint. I thrust me cold hands into my pockets, desperate to restore some warmth to my fingers... and found my left hand closing on a paper. I halted, twisting out of Frank's grip, running back to the grave. I retrieved the note, scanning the words quickly.
"Hey," one of the undertakers growled, holding up his shovel and spilling dirt all over the coffin. Her coffin. The thought caused yet another wave of nausea to wash over me.
"I just need to put something in..." I whispered, my voice hoarse.
I held the note to my lips, kissing it softly in a way that reminded me of the one night that had changed it all, the first tears of the day finally rolling down my cheeks like my self-hatred just ebbing away. The ink now beginning to run, I threw it into the grave, and stepped back, watching as they proceeded to throw dirt in, the soil consuming her and the words I'd never said. And once they'd all left, I knelt by her side, slapping my hands into the wet mud, covering my pristine suit in dirt. It's how I deserved to be. Dirty.
"Goodbye, Yasmin," I whispered, smiling slightly as I upturned my face to the heavens, rain making me blink as I sobbed silently, the tears mingling with the water, "goodnight."
Wake up, Yasmin.
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Post by ricegrains&rosesxo. on Feb 28, 2007 19:52:35 GMT
Ohmygod.
Thats just... ohmygod.
I actually shed a tear there.
Why did I have to go and commit suicide eh.
I feel bad now =[
Real bad.
I died hating him, in his house, without telling anyone.
D'you know how bad that gets me?
It's meannn of me.
And now it's all over =[
Bring it back, Allieee =[
*wails*
Xoxoxo *SxPxF*
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Post by xxcemetarydrivexx on Feb 28, 2007 20:15:56 GMT
Thats so sad.....very sad......What did the note say ? Awww..... such a good story doesn't deserve to end...... yeah yasmin wake up and make the story a few chapters longer XD  Amy xx |
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Almost mins before i walked past allie this morning. Lol but now i'm in my english class doing "research".
